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love this just as much on the second read. your dedication to and adept treatment of the bread metaphor was so great - you are compelling and funny, and i can't wait to read the balance of it

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Thank you!

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Omg, an exclamation point! I’m rubbing off on you....

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If I was more like you, I’d comment on that phrasing.

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Ha, well played, Craig, well played

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